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Tonight Is Your Night

I want to savor your taste upon my lips Caress my tongue across your tip Draw me closer as I sway my hips Craving your passion, let me take a sip So deep inside, I want to feel your nature rise. Lay back and relax , let me take you on a ride You be the passenger, allow me to drive Succumb to these pleasures, please free your mind Let me do things to you, which you didn’t think existed On the edge of nirvana, in harmonious bliss Tonight is your night; tonight it’s all about you Let’s explore all the things that unrestrained lovers do Your wish is my command, anything you ask of me. It’s just one of those nights; I’d rather give than receive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/28/2011 5:34:00 PM
SEX....... dam girl i started rising here for a min while reading. lol. very well writing. i loved it very much. lol .
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Date: 9/20/2011 10:41:00 PM
I love this poem! It's very sensual. It must have tooken great thought and real feelings to come up with the rhyme patterns. Your a good poet to me.... KEEP UP WITH THE FRESHNESS!!!!!!!
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Date: 9/19/2011 5:26:00 PM
An offer he couldn't refuse, Chiquita. Sweet loving piece
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Date: 9/19/2011 4:26:00 PM
Nice write very erotic and sensual...with love...old Jack
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Date: 9/19/2011 4:02:00 PM
Erotic. nice use of imagery words
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Date: 9/19/2011 3:14:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “Makes Myself Consider Candlelight & Soft Music Playing & Slowly Swaying Upon The Beach In A Moment From Here Unto Eternity My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Barbara! *^_^* We All Need A Night Off Sometimes So Tis Good to Know That Your Beauty Is One Willing to Offer Such, My Dear *^_^* Very Lovely In Its Seaside Thought &, Thank You, for Your Kind Visit; Sweeet!” === My Love Unto Your Precious Treasures, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 9/19/2011 1:53:00 PM
You give me new ideas, naughty! I always enjoy reading yours on romance. You just cross all limits. Great one yet again
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Date: 9/19/2011 1:11:00 PM
A well written romantic poem! I truly enjoyed reading this worthy poem. Have a nice day,BAITA
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:41:00 AM
Holy Matrimony Batman! What a lucky guy to have a cat woman like you, Chiquita! Someone who cares more about giving than receiving. Besides the obvious pleasures which you allude to so well, you've captured what I believe is the absolute essentail to a successful and loving life: giving to others. If we all did more of this (and made more beautuful love) the world would be Heaven on Earth. Thanks for sharing and commenting on "Where have you gone America?" All smiles:) Terry
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:30:00 AM
Wow! The trip brings unimagined treasures to the mind and the steam sizzles. Great verse little girl.
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Date: 9/19/2011 7:47:00 AM
this has so much passion and emotion. I love it!!! thanks for all your comments on my work each and everyone I appreciate. cory
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Date: 9/19/2011 3:14:00 AM
passion-filled, so inviting, chiqui... your words entice oh so heavenly!!... :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/18/2011 10:31:00 PM
sweetly steamy is the night, the moon unhinged just right, what an absolute delight, to be reading you...
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Date: 9/18/2011 9:41:00 PM
this is something else. chiamaka you've over done it this time. you made mine to look like child's play. wonderful, in fact i'm speechless.
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