Tonight Is Your Night

I want to savor your taste upon my lips
Caress my tongue across your tip

Draw me closer as I sway my hips
Craving your passion, let me take a sip

So deep inside, I want to feel your nature rise.
Lay back and relax , let me take you on a ride

You be the passenger, allow me to drive
Succumb to these pleasures, please free your mind

Let me do things to you, which you didn’t think existed
On the edge of nirvana, in harmonious bliss

Tonight is your night; tonight it’s all about you
Let’s explore all the things that unrestrained lovers do

Your wish is my command, anything you ask of me.
It’s just one of those nights; I’d rather give than receive

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Roman Chebukin

Date: 9/28/2011 5:34:00 PM

SEX....... dam girl i started rising here for a min while reading. lol. very well writing. i loved it very much. lol .

Brandon Harrison

Date: 9/20/2011 10:41:00 PM

I love this poem! It's very sensual. It must have tooken great thought and real feelings to come up with the rhyme patterns. Your a good poet to me.... KEEP UP WITH THE FRESHNESS!!!!!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/19/2011 5:26:00 PM

An offer he couldn't refuse, Chiquita. Sweet loving piece

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 9/19/2011 4:26:00 PM

Nice write very erotic and sensual...with love...old Jack

Mathias Yakubu

Date: 9/19/2011 4:02:00 PM

Erotic. nice use of imagery words

Jl Sadberry

Date: 9/19/2011 3:14:00 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Makes Myself Consider Candlelight & Soft Music Playing & Slowly Swaying Upon The Beach In A Moment From Here Unto Eternity My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Barbara! *^_^* We All Need A Night Off Sometimes So Tis Good to Know That Your Beauty Is One Willing to Offer Such, My Dear *^_^* Very Lovely In Its Seaside Thought &, Thank You, for Your Kind Visit; Sweeet!” === My Love Unto Your Precious Treasures, Always & Forever, Jasper *

M. Hussain Effendi

Date: 9/19/2011 1:53:00 PM

You give me new ideas, naughty! I always enjoy reading yours on romance. You just cross all limits. Great one yet again

Joseph Osita

Date: 9/19/2011 1:11:00 PM

A well written romantic poem! I truly enjoyed reading this worthy poem. Have a nice day,BAITA

Terrell Martin

Date: 9/19/2011 10:41:00 AM

Holy Matrimony Batman! What a lucky guy to have a cat woman like you, Chiquita! Someone who cares more about giving than receiving. Besides the obvious pleasures which you allude to so well, you've captured what I believe is the absolute essentail to a successful and loving life: giving to others. If we all did more of this (and made more beautuful love) the world would be Heaven on Earth. Thanks for sharing and commenting on "Where have you gone America?" All smiles:) Terry