Tonight I Will Dream

Tonight I will dream,
of a beautiful cake with ice cream.
I hope there will be many gifts each with a card,
maybe enough to fill my backyard.                                                          
Under glistening skies of blue,                                                                 
yellow flowers will show through.                                                           
Magical swirls on my cake,                                                                          
like beautiful colors from the lake.
Shining gold and blue gift bags,    
make me want to yell and raise a flag.   
Tomorrow is my birthday,                                                                                                                                       only white clouds no gray.
 
 
 
Date Written: 9/26/2020
Original Poem: A Happy Birthday Dream
Rithimus Divisa 7 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Tor Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 4:14 PM
Happy belated birthday.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 4:22 PM
"Thank You," so much. Have a wonderful and blessed day.............
Wolf Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 7:32 PM
"Magical swirls on my cake like beautiful colors from the lake" -- dazzling imagery, Paula!! Happy Birthday to you and many, many more. Light and Joy, Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
September 29, 2020 at 10:12 AM
Thank You, for reading and for your kind words. Glad your like this one. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day.............
La France Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Paula, that's a sweet dream for sure, wonderful writing _Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
September 28, 2020 at 1:09 PM
Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad your like this one. Have a wonderful day and week.............
Foster Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 7:54 AM
This was a lovely piece of cake... excellent... Note, on my screen, some of the words are off the page... but I am not sure if it is just on my end. Great day... sharp pen. Ann
Goldsmith Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 8:49 AM
Thanks for your note. Yes, let's eat cake lots of cake. The words look OK here. Have a great day and week............
Ermine Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 2:06 AM
Yay!.... All the makings of a tasty party!... Many Happy Returns, Paula.! Have a most wonderful Birthday...!!
Goldsmith Avatar
September 27, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad your like it. Have a wonderful day.............
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