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Tonight I Will Dream

Tonight I will dream, of a beautiful cake with ice cream. I hope there will be many gifts each with a card, maybe enough to fill my backyard. Under glistening skies of blue, yellow flowers will show through. Magical swirls on my cake, like beautiful colors from the lake. Shining gold and blue gift bags, make me want to yell and raise a flag. Tomorrow is my birthday, only white clouds no gray. Date Written: 9/26/2020 Original Poem: A Happy Birthday Dream Rithimus Divisa 7 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Gregory R Barden

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Date: 10/6/2020 4:14:00 PM
Happy belated birthday.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/6/2020 4:22:00 PM
"Thank You," so much. Have a wonderful and blessed day.............
Date: 9/28/2020 7:32:00 PM
"Magical swirls on my cake like beautiful colors from the lake" -- dazzling imagery, Paula!! Happy Birthday to you and many, many more. Light and Joy, Gershon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/29/2020 10:12:00 AM
Thank You, for reading and for your kind words. Glad your like this one. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day.............
Date: 9/28/2020 9:23:00 AM
Paula, that's a sweet dream for sure, wonderful writing _Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/28/2020 1:09:00 PM
Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad your like this one. Have a wonderful day and week.............
Date: 9/27/2020 7:54:00 AM
This was a lovely piece of cake... excellent... Note, on my screen, some of the words are off the page... but I am not sure if it is just on my end. Great day... sharp pen. Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/27/2020 8:49:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Yes, let's eat cake lots of cake. The words look OK here. Have a great day and week............
Date: 9/27/2020 2:06:00 AM
Yay!.... All the makings of a tasty party!... Many Happy Returns, Paula.! Have a most wonderful Birthday...!!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/27/2020 8:48:00 AM
Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad your like it. Have a wonderful day.............

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