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Tonight I Sent a Poem

~ Tonight I sent a poem streaking 'cross the evening sky Sprinkled it with stardust so it'd glisten flying by Wishing you would see it when you look up where you are To find the words "I love you" written on a falling star ~

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Date: 2/13/2020 5:07:00 PM
I caught it , it might have belong to someone else, but like the bridle bouquet I caught it :)
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2020 5:09:00 PM
I think that is wonderful. : ) Thank you so much Eve. I am happy you were watching and ready when it passed by. : )
Date: 2/13/2020 5:45:00 AM
WoW! Chris This is so lovely. It is well written, magical,romantic and clever. I hope the one you wrote this for sees it. This going straight into my favs:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2020 7:34:00 AM
Thank you Alexis. I appreciate your kindness my friend.
Date: 2/12/2020 8:12:00 PM
I don't know anyone other than you who would think to sprinkle a poem with stardust, Chris. Just beautiful! ~ Glistening away
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2020 7:34:00 AM
Thanks my friend. I just had some extra stardust laying around. : )
Date: 2/12/2020 7:27:00 PM
sigh...so beautiful...my wish for you is that she sees it too... how romantically beautiful Chris...hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2020 7:33:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Your comments always make me smile. I am happy you stopped by
Date: 2/12/2020 6:48:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 2/12/2020 5:28:00 PM
This is so nice Chris. I was just outside and saw only one star shining in the sky to the Northwest :) Have a nice evening!
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Chris Green
Date: 2/13/2020 7:32:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi.

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