Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Tonight I Sent a Poem

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Tonight I sent a poem
streaking 'cross the evening sky
Sprinkled it with stardust
so it'd glisten flying by

Wishing you would see it
when you look up where you are
To find the words "I love you"
written on a falling star

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Eve Roper February 13, 2020 at 5:07 PM I caught it , it might have belong to someone else, but like the bridle bouquet I caught it :) Chris Green February 13, 2020 at 5:09 PM I think that is wonderful. : ) Thank you so much Eve. I am happy you were watching and ready when it passed by. : )

Alexis Y. February 13, 2020 at 5:45 AM WoW! Chris This is so lovely. It is well written, magical,romantic and clever. I hope the one you wrote this for sees it. This going straight into my favs:-) Alexis Chris Green February 13, 2020 at 7:34 AM Thank you Alexis. I appreciate your kindness my friend.

Gershon Wolf February 12, 2020 at 8:12 PM I don't know anyone other than you who would think to sprinkle a poem with stardust, Chris. Just beautiful! ~ Glistening away Chris Green February 13, 2020 at 7:34 AM Thanks my friend. I just had some extra stardust laying around. : )

Sandra Adams February 12, 2020 at 7:27 PM sigh...so beautiful...my wish for you is that she sees it too... how romantically beautiful Chris...hugs Chris Green February 13, 2020 at 7:33 AM Thank you my friend. Your comments always make me smile. I am happy you stopped by

Line Gauthier February 12, 2020 at 6:48 PM Lovely imagery, Chris. Chris Green February 13, 2020 at 7:32 AM Thank you Line.

Heidi Sands February 12, 2020 at 5:28 PM This is so nice Chris. I was just outside and saw only one star shining in the sky to the Northwest :) Have a nice evening! Chris Green February 13, 2020 at 7:32 AM Thank you so very much Heidi.