Home » Poems » Acheini Ben-Ameh » Tonight

Tonight

Tonight I am going to die Tonight i am going to die I am so hungry I am so cold Will have a bite to eat Then Lie in the bathe for a bit Tonight I'm gonna love me Tonight, Tonight the night I am going to die. My skin cells fight the water hot I fell them Lose Losing with all their might My soul removes Light headed... Headed to the light Her body lies Submerged she cries Accepting it The night she chose to die.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/7/2016 11:04:00 AM

Acheini Ben-Ameh, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Moon Flower

Date: 5/5/2016 6:28:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Acheini.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/5/2016 12:30:00 AM

Acheini, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs

Skat A

Date: 5/4/2016 8:11:00 PM

Acheini Ben-Ameh, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT