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Tonight

Tonight I have ended my secret romance I have shut the door on your lies "I love you" "I care"- was all a fiction of my imagination. Tonight I have decided to put an end to my endless whining and self- pity I know who you are and what you are ALL about and it ain't ME Tonight you have shown your true colours The gentle lamb yet fearless lion had all been a delusion. Tonight I said to myself, "forget this" Why search for something you've already have. Tonight I remain determine to shake off all my inhibitions and just tell you how I feel... Tonight Tonight Tonight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/27/2013 1:07:00 AM
Can feel the emotions!
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Date: 4/26/2013 9:52:00 AM
I like the alliteration in this piece, the repetative use of tonight works well, it would be better if you cut the line about "Jerk"
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Anoush Harrison-Jackson
Date: 4/27/2013 12:14:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. I have taken your advice.

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