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''Tonight''

Blush,flushed of face left the girl with an open heart. ''Send me his love''she cries. Trample my woes. Does love last in the hues of his eyes? Squander fears of rejection. Her fate lye only on his return.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/23/2011 11:36:00 PM
I like the ending of this how her fate lies only on his return. A bit like romeo and Juliet!
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:06:00 PM
deep poetry alluding to a lost luv Kacey.. awesome picture painted in words my friend.. emotion expressed so sweetly..luv..
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Date: 5/22/2011 6:44:00 PM
this has a great flow. cory
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