''Tonight''

Blush,flushed of face left the girl with an open heart.
''Send me his love''she cries.
Trample my woes.
Does love last in the hues of his eyes?
Squander fears of rejection.
Her fate lye only on his return.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 11:36 PM
I like the ending of this how her fate lies only on his return. A bit like romeo and Juliet!
Sweetheart Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 7:06 PM
deep poetry alluding to a lost luv Kacey.. awesome picture painted in words my friend.. emotion expressed so sweetly..luv..
Long Avatar
May 22, 2011 at 6:44 PM
this has a great flow. cory
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