Tonight

I want tonight to be the night
The one that we keep insight
A forever moment cherished in time
The work is done, and the hill is climbed
One special evening with you cradled in my arms
I’ve fallen for your unique and beautiful charms
Now I need to show you my light inside
From a heart that nearly died
You are my everything
And I can’t wait to hear you sing
Just this once baby girl I want you to know
I need us to take it ever so slow
Please let me be your person of trust
My everything for you is an absolute must
I want tonight to be the night
The one that we keep insight
One special evening with you cradled in my arms
I’ve fallen for your unique and beautiful charms
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artlyy Avatar
September 19, 2026 at 10:54 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Loving Iii Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:54 AM
The little precious ones always inspire. Just thinking, Life is slow from birth. they don't seem to be growing but they are.
Loving Iii Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:53 AM
The little precious ones always inspire. Just thinking, Life is slow from birth. they don't seem to be growing but they are.
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