Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Tonight

Tonight we sit under the full moonlight,                           what a beautiful sight.                                                                      Our special love,                                                            is like a love dove.                                                                                     


What a loving kiss from you,                                            you never make me blue.                                                I love your hugs,                                                            but not the mosquito bugs.                                                                           


The pale moon emerged from dark clouds,                        a million diamond stars were in the crowds.                             Each diamond star prettier than the next,                                    the sky and all the great effects.                                                                   


As the night goes on,                                                      the moon will be gone.                                                   The day will be here soon,                                              we need to say goodnight to the moon.                                                             


Date Written:7/16/202

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One In Five 2 Poetry Contest                                                         
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Len Gasun July 31, 2022 at 7:22 AM A fascinating image of the dark night is well-portrayed in your poem my dear friend Paula. I extremely enjoyed reading it tonight and the mosquito bugs gave me a smile. Thanks a lot for sharing! Congratulations on your win and this fantastic write my dear friend! God bless you and your writings always. Hugs. Paula Goldsmith July 31, 2022 at 10:58 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you enjoyed my "Tonight" write. Please, No mosquito bugs for me. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away.....................

Jennifer Proxenos July 30, 2022 at 5:31 AM Congratulations dear Paula on you wonderful entry and placement win in this contest, really well penned. Sorry i have been a little scarce for some weeks, broke my wrist and had to go into hospital and typing with my left two fingers, so I'm A little slow. hugs and blessings jennifer. slow.timehttps://www.poetrysoup.comaspxand your great plaing ine contest Paula Goldsmith July 30, 2022 at 8:48 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. I love the night sky with all the diamonds/stars. I did not know you got hurt. So sorry. I will put you on my soup prayer list. One summer as a kid, I broke my wrist in 3 places. Bone is a very different pain. Get well real soon. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away.....................

Joseph May July 30, 2022 at 3:02 AM Luna shining bright among the diamonds in the sky, Congrats on your win Paula... Paula Goldsmith July 30, 2022 at 8:43 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your wonderful contest. I enjoyed writing this fun sky write. I love the night sky with all the diamonds/stars. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away.....................

Sotto Poet July 29, 2022 at 7:18 PM Congratulations on your contest-winning placement, Paula. You deserve it with this well-written poem. Paula Goldsmith July 30, 2022 at 8:39 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this fun "Tonight" win. Good to hear from you. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away.....................

Delice Arleen Skelly July 19, 2022 at 2:42 AM Nice entry into the contest Paula..Delice Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2022 at 2:59 PM Thank You, for reading/writing. Good to hear from you. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................

Bill Baker July 17, 2022 at 3:57 PM You paint a beautiful picture with your poetic words, Paula. Good luck in the contest my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2022 at 2:58 PM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your good luck. Good to hear from you. Glad you like this write. I enjoyed writing it. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................

Chris Conn July 16, 2022 at 3:27 PM Good luck Paula!! Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 9:57 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your good luck. Good to hear from you. Glad you like this "Tonight" write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................

Darlene De Beaulieu July 16, 2022 at 3:20 PM Hello Paula, Paula this is lovely. Very romantic. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu July 18, 2022 at 3:47 PM Hello Paula, yes I Hve enjoyed your poem..Good to be here. I will and you do the same. Hugs. Paula Goldsmith July 17, 2022 at 9:55 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Good to hear from you. Glad you like this romantic write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.....................