Tonight

tonight
the dark
comes with
skepticism, doubt, distrust.......

tonight
the pain
touches
incredulity and scoffing

tonight
the loneliness
comes for
an inclination to believe that we are motivated purely by self-interest


-September 06, 2019 Chattogram
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Romios Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 11:09 AM
Very expressive and, I think, honest Panagiota
Rodrigues Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 6:40 AM
Nicely done!
Krutsinger Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 4:15 AM
"the dark, the pain, the loneliness". This is not your usual "I am in love theme". I like it, but feel more comfortable for you in the other realm.
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