Tongue Twister Poem ~ Rainy Night

Tongue twister poem is a self created form. In this form every line has a tongue twisting 
effect with ample usage of Onomatopoeia...

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Swishy swashy waves washing sea shores..
Splattering spluttering slowly foam scours..
Rumbling rambling whooshing, wave roars..
Cackling clashes cracking rocky cores..
Gushing winds growl, grumbling giddy..
Thumping tumbles every trembling tree..
Slashing splashing rushes rain..
Whizzing whooping plunking on window pane…
Sitting on stairs, staring stars at night..
Melting mellow in murmuring moonlight..
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The rhyme-scheme used here is aabbccdd
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Mannan Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Hey Meghana, what a lovely picture you paint before our eyes. greaat going.
Spence Sr Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 5:36 PM
Great job with this alliteration pattern! I love to dance in the rain myself. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
Brown Avatar
May 28, 2010 at 7:28 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Meghana. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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