Tongue Twister

Standing still, she smells so sweet,

tongues tickle tonsils, this trying treat.

Fevers flourish, fantasies flew,

better.....breath.......because.......becoming............blue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 12, 2009 at 12:15 AM
Definately a tongue twister, loved the ending...Raul
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