Tongue Lashing

Fiercely his tongue lashed.
Head bowed her spirit bleeds out.
Invisible cut.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
December 13, 2016 at 3:48 PM
good metaphor and last line even goes with your last name!
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