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Toned and Tanned On Ormond Sands

On Ormond Beach sands I sit one day Raise my head My eyes in gaze Bikini clad babe Catches my eye My heart jumps With delightful sighs Her rainbow colours In what she wears Lures my thoughts In x-ray stares The curves of she Blows my mind Shaped of girl Just my kind Beside me she sits All toned and tanned Long blond hair Like Ormond sands We introduce And talk for ages About various things Our intelligent pages It's getting late Farewells we say We agree to meet Another day Walking home My mind in thought I say to myself She's the girl I've sought What happens tomorrow Just wait and see Bikini clad babe On the beach, we'll see? http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love5.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/25/2009 3:41:00 PM
nice writing
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Date: 8/24/2009 6:36:00 PM
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vince
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Date: 8/24/2009 4:22:00 PM
Oh watch out with those x-ray eyes.....Mr Superman is alive and well!!! Loved it!!
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:49:00 PM
I know of at least one bikini-clad lady who'll be searching for the Highlander on the Ormond shores. Delightful write! (And I loved the sequel!) Love you, Carolyn
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Date: 8/24/2009 2:58:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
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