Tonderment and Ponder

Should I stay?
and splendor,
Your heart so warm
And vibrant feelings like a storm 

The tenderness
Of kisses
and
Welcoming wishes

Shall soon
Transform
A cherished moment
Elated, I am
Sedated with a fervor

Feeling my
tensions and sensory
of my inner observer;
of your being

Bring to me
on my knees and
vow I will,
to Appease

If you wish
For me
And spree my plea 


(Fiction)
revised
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
July 10, 2008 at 5:35 PM
laura - beautiful poem with exceptional flow - great job
Sheart Avatar
July 10, 2008 at 4:02 PM
Hi Laura Enjoyed the feelings of romance in this one! Wonderful and very well written. Vibrant feelings like a storm,love that line....Love Light Truth Patricia
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