Tomorrow's Sun

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Tomorrow's sun will bestow generous rays of hope when it emerges from under the cloak of dark clouds When the winter of discontent Is burnished by the sun's golden light. When broken people are mended And all the lost are found When hope floats Over all the troubled seas Of our world Tomorrow's sun will shine infinitely brighter When an overflowing cup of peace and love is passed from neighbor to neighbor, stranger to stranger until all humanity drinks from it. It will continue to shine When there are no more wars left to be fought, and a peaceful world is bathed in liquid gold. Date written: 06/24/2018

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Susan Gentry

Date: 7/3/2018 8:19:00 PM

A great message. Congratulations on your win! :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/4/2018 8:56:00 AM

Thank you so much, Susan!:-)

Charles Messina

Date: 7/3/2018 5:48:00 AM

Edward, thanks for entering my contest and being a part of this. Congratulations on you well deserved win with this wonderful poem...God Bless...Charlie

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/3/2018 6:04:00 AM

Thank you very much for placing me, Charlie!:-) This is greatly gratifying and humbling!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/2/2018 10:51:00 PM

Drink from the loving cup, neighbor -- A beautiful message, Edward, rewarded with a podium win. Congratulations, Gershon Wolf

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/3/2018 6:02:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon! Most appreciated.

Curtis Moorman

Date: 7/2/2018 10:40:00 PM

Edward, your cup of love and peace overflowed in your poem. What a pleasure to read it and see it place in the contest. Congratulations, My Brother!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/3/2018 6:01:00 AM

Thank you so much, Curtis!