Tomorrow's Poem

Deep

within

me

lives

a poem,

its words

unformed,

unsaid.

Yet,

the rhythm

beats

and sings

and grows,

with

This

new

birth

inside

my  head.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Chircop Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:29 PM
When heart,soul and mind entwine ,the birth of your poem becomes the infant ,toddler,child and adult expressing the poet's thought beyond his/her life.I really enjoyed your thought provoking poem.
Gifford Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 6:38 PM
I am in agreement with your thoughts, Charmaine. And I'm glad you enjoyed my poem, as I did one of yours today. Blessings, Darlene
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 3:19 PM
Every new poem is like a baby your own unique creation - you just hope others love it as much as you do:-) hugs jan xx
Gifford Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 3:39 PM
Isn't that the truth! A mother's love is like no others. Thanks, always, for your welcome comments, Jan. Blessings, Darlene
Gorelick Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 12:42 PM
sweet as can be.. enjoyed. BG
Gifford Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 1:38 PM
The birth of a new baby is always a joy! And the labor pains are forgotten. Thanks, Barbara
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