Tomorrow's Poem

Deep

within me

breathes a poem,

it's words unformed

unsaid.

Yet the rhythm

beats and sings

and grows,  

deep inside

my head.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gifford Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:00 PM
When the muse visits, I tell him he can wake me up any time he wishes, and stay as long as he wants. I never sleep more than 4 or 5 hours a night anyway. At age 78, I have more important things to do before God calls me home.
Orozco Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 12:20 AM
Beautiful permonition to a poem to be! You are truly talented! :) edward
Smith Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 8:29 PM
Happens to me all the time. I email it to myself or I might forget it. Hugs Tim
Gifford Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Hi, Tim, I glad you could identify with my poem. I pray that an awareness of a new poem coming, percolating, brewing inside us never stops. because it is such a wonderful feeling. Like a new adventure. And yes, if we don't capture those first few thoughts, how quickly they vanish. Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I appreciate it since this is only my first few days here and I'm just finding my way around. Now I in turn will go read one of your poems.
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