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Tomorrow's Menu

would you like to know what's on tomorrow's menu?       Me-n-u!

written 25 Aug 2020

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/29/2020 6:27:00 PM

guess I better get off here. Joe's night to be home by 7:30 and I need to get dinner on. Hey, I saw my first movie since they closed the theaters in spring! It is a brand new one about road rage. Really good! Russell Crowe in it. I can't even remember the title, but something that makes you think of road rage. On the tip of my tongue. Nope I just don't have it yet. Later, Gator.

John Watt
Date: 8/29/2020 7:22:00 PM

Let me know the title when you figure it out. You being away from theaters is like me being away from baseball stadiums!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/29/2020 12:03:00 AM

What a clever play on words. I have never taken MENU apart like this before, now I can think of nothing more interesting.

John Watt
Date: 8/29/2020 10:15:00 AM

I guess this pickup line only works on people who enjoy cheesy humor, but they must exist, right? Thank you, Caren for your many kind words today. Hugs ~ John

Paul Callus

Date: 8/27/2020 11:55:00 AM

Excellent, John! Creative! Congratulations on a very deserved win. Regards // paul

John Watt
Date: 8/27/2020 1:39:00 PM

Thanks to a poet I admire ~ enjoy your day, Paul!

V. Deepa

Date: 8/27/2020 6:24:00 AM

Wow......clever, creative write ..dear John sir..:-) Loved your amazing line :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win. Keep inspiring.Take care.Warm regards.:-)

John Watt
Date: 8/27/2020 1:38:00 PM

Thanks for all the kind words, Deepa. Enjoy your day!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/27/2020 3:04:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line, John ... I think it will be meatballs :) - // Anne-Lise :)

John Watt
Date: 8/27/2020 1:38:00 PM

Hmm, Swedish meatballs? Do they have Norwegian meatballs on the menu? Thanks for the smile Anne-Lise!

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/27/2020 1:33:00 AM

I only get the bill, c'est la vie, John, Congrats! Stay safe and well my friend, Aloha! William

John Watt
Date: 8/27/2020 1:37:00 PM

Thanks for the read and the fun comment, William. Aloha to you ~ John

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/26/2020 7:53:00 PM

Such a creative, cute, WINNING poem, John! Janice

John Watt
Date: 8/26/2020 7:55:00 PM

Thanks Janice! Pretty sure it would never work, alas.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2020 7:33:00 PM

Great Monoku, John , congratulations on your 2nd place win. Hugs Eve

John Watt
Date: 8/26/2020 7:38:00 PM

Thank you for the thoughtful comment, my friend. Hope you are enjoying your day. Hugs ~ John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2020 5:15:00 PM

I had to think about it for a second. I was thinking MEN!!

John Watt
Date: 8/26/2020 5:17:00 PM

I have no reply for that.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2020 5:14:00 PM

Oh wow, that was SO clever!!! I love it, John. Congrats. wish I had time to see more!!

John Watt
Date: 8/26/2020 5:16:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/26/2020 4:59:00 PM

Very cute! Love the word play! Kudos and congrats!

John Watt
Date: 8/26/2020 5:15:00 PM

Thanks, Sam. Grateful I won't be having to try it out anytime soon. It's pretty close to "Iowa" on the corn-meter, haha!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/26/2020 4:36:00 PM

"Me-n-u!" how very cute ~ congrats on your win, John.

John Watt
Date: 8/26/2020 4:38:00 PM

Thank you very much, Line.

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/26/2020 4:16:00 PM

Hi John, Congratulations on medal winning placement. Original wordplay concept. Howard

John Watt
Date: 8/26/2020 4:39:00 PM

Thank you very much, Howard. I enjoyed your entry also.

Silent One

Date: 8/26/2020 8:58:00 AM

awww thats corny, but sweet, lol....

John Watt
Date: 8/26/2020 9:35:00 AM

"As corny as Kansas in August", to quote Rodgers and Hammerstein. It's fun to get a little corny every now and again. Thanks for the visit, my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/26/2020 12:21:00 AM

Haha, you've still got it John, good luck. Tom

John Watt
Date: 8/26/2020 9:33:00 AM

You mean good luck with the poem, or with the pick up line? I think they're both going to need a LOT of luck, lol! Thanks, Tom. It's fun to be goofy once in a while.

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 8/25/2020 9:24:00 PM

Good one! It took few seconds for me to understand. Great play of words.. Have a great day. Regards, Rama

John Watt
Date: 8/25/2020 9:42:00 PM

Rama, thanks for sticking with it long enough to sort it out. Always nice to hear from you, my friend!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/25/2020 9:09:00 PM

That's gotta be a winner - for cheesiest pick up line ever ;) This gave me a much-needed chuckle today!

John Watt
Date: 8/25/2020 9:14:00 PM

Hehehe, that's what I was going for. The old cheesy chuckle. Thanks Michelle!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/25/2020 8:14:00 PM

Of course. :) This is adorable. I just love what you have created here. Cute, clever and playful are your thoughts. I must place this in my favorites. Thanks for the smile this evening. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt
Date: 8/25/2020 8:30:00 PM

I'm glad this brought a smile, Brandy. I don't write 'flirty' very often, lol! Thanks for the fave.

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