Tomorrows Light

day by day 
                                      as far as the I could see

                                               the horizon

                                    the line between hedonism
                                            and brain injury





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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 9/17/2018 10:58:00 AM
A key lime twist is sweet poem be, MM. Cool pen dive. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 9/17/2018 2:52:00 PM
Freddie Love! Thank you so much <3 Hugs Galore my friend xomo
Date: 9/16/2018 11:30:00 PM
A fine line, M.M. Keep the faith. :) gw
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/17/2018 1:24:00 PM
Who knew, the sun'll come up tomorrow ;) love and hugs xomo
Date: 9/10/2018 9:05:00 AM
Inevitable so...some may say it's going to go anyway...interesting write...All the best Maureen
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/10/2018 10:02:00 AM
Interesting comment my friend ;) thank you and you xomo
Date: 9/10/2018 3:43:00 AM
I wish you well on the road to recovery Maureen. But such a long process for sure. Tom
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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 9/10/2018 8:00:00 AM
Yes, thank you Tom! The seed for this piece planted long ago, a conversation with my dad, his fatherly frustration with his daughter seemingly unable to grasp the idea of prepairing for the future. I have a path now, no longer wandering, that makes all of the difference. A lovely day to you my friend! xomo
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