Tomorrows Light

day by day as far as the I could see the horizon the line between hedonism and brain injury ***

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 9/17/2018 10:58:00 AM

A key lime twist is sweet poem be, MM. Cool pen dive. Love and smiles always.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/17/2018 2:52:00 PM

Freddie Love! Thank you so much <3 Hugs Galore my friend xomo

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/16/2018 11:30:00 PM

A fine line, M.M. Keep the faith. :) gw

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/17/2018 1:24:00 PM

Who knew, the sun'll come up tomorrow ;) love and hugs xomo

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/10/2018 9:05:00 AM

Inevitable so...some may say it's going to go anyway...interesting write...All the best Maureen

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/10/2018 10:02:00 AM

Interesting comment my friend ;) thank you and you xomo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/10/2018 3:43:00 AM

I wish you well on the road to recovery Maureen. But such a long process for sure. Tom

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 9/10/2018 8:00:00 AM

Yes, thank you Tom! The seed for this piece planted long ago, a conversation with my dad, his fatherly frustration with his daughter seemingly unable to grasp the idea of prepairing for the future. I have a path now, no longer wandering, that makes all of the difference. A lovely day to you my friend! xomo