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Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/22/2016 12:19:00 PM

Hi Bonnie, I love your poetry. Tomorrows flight is great. The form should be Quatrain not Rubaiyat. . Poetry soup has a good example for rubaiyat....Pashang

Bonnie Jennings
Date: 6/25/2016 7:42:00 PM

You know, I kind of, pretty much, knew ~ Your name is Persian... LOL... wink wink

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/23/2016 2:12:00 AM

By the way the first word is "Pashang" and is my first name. This is a Persian name....(lol)....Pashang

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/22/2016 10:07:00 PM

By the way the first word is "Pashang" and is my first name. This is a Persian name....(lol)....Pashang

Pashang Salehi
Date: 6/22/2016 10:05:00 PM

Hi Bonnie, All Rubaiyat is quatrain, but not all quatrains are Rubaiyat. The Soup has this explanation: In each quatrain, all lines rhyme except the third, leading to this pattern: a.... a - 2nd line rhymes with the first. b.... a - 4th line rhymes with the first and second I am so glad that you are reading Persian poets....Pashang

Bonnie Jennings
Date: 6/22/2016 12:29:00 PM

I don't know what the first word in my response is supposed to be (lol) "Passing." ?

Bonnie Jennings
Date: 6/22/2016 12:28:00 PM

Passing, first thank you so much for reading, contemplating, and responding. I do so much appreciate... I read Omar Khyamm and tried my best to think and write like him, one of the greatest poets that has ever lived... Thank you so much...