Tomorrows

Your angry voice tells me
you are tired, tired not just
physically from the drain of
responsibilities, but from feeling
forced to continue to trod the
same burdensome path—
A path that steepens as the
years close in and you feel you 
must stretch yourself beyond
the point of knowing how far.
I hear desperation in your 
angry voice, and I see that 
little boy who stifles his
cries to act like a man in
a world that has no room
for the dreams of a child or
for the dreams of a tired man.
It is easier to let your angry voice
speak to tell me these things.

© 2012 Connie Marcum Wong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2012 at 9:31 PM
connie, I am going all over the place and cannot find this thing you told me to look for. I will go back to hotmail and see if you gave a name of the poem. Are you happy I finally got our winners up!!!
Gasun Avatar
August 14, 2012 at 8:54 AM
A fantastic poem you've penned, Connie. I love it!
Wesley Avatar
August 12, 2012 at 1:00 PM
Funny Connie, I just posted Yesterdays. The child within seems to always need recognition and being an adult dealing with all that goes onfinds us needing a less complicated time. Beautifully written with so much meaning.Love, Elizabeth
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 8:05 PM
HI,Connie, thanks for visiting my poetry recently. I have been so busy. YOu can see in my blog what I was doing all weekend! It is so nice for my son to finally be with his little family!!
Williams Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 4:58 AM
Connie, I can relate to this myself, and believe me it's tough at times....I like it..David
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 9:14 PM
Connie, I can relate to this one so much. Some days my own son gets this way but I am so proud of him for holding up in this tough world. I really enjoyed seeing this one. Hope your eyes are OK? Luv, Andrea (will be doing Constanza contest when I can)!
Andresen Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 4:36 PM
Well written Connie - the trials of life for better or worse - Have a lovely weekend - oxox // Anne-Lise
Horne Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 12:44 PM
excellent write, Connie - and congrats on your wins, my friend. Hope this is just fictional
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 4:58 PM
My husband's voice speaks loud and clear but after 30 years I hear his inner voice speaking to me also.Thank you Jack.
Wright Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 11:14 AM
Brutally good. My first time rating...more stars the better right?
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