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OUR FUTURE- I may have solar power, have an AI assistant to well, assist; and I will live high up in a tower, where the world below me will not exist. My 3-D printer car will be hands free, windows displaying a montage of sea; beaches and many a flower and tree, oh, to technology. Earth you have our deep apology, 'cause we destroyed your climatology; plastic and junk the fish now devour, deforestation of habitats still persist. The world I love is drowning in debris, and I write poetry! ____________________________ October 7, 2019 Poetry/Rhyme/Tomorrow Is Copyright Protected ID, 19-1186-938-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, I sense Tomorrow is the Future sponsor, Sheri Fresonke Harper Honorable Mention

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Date: 11/16/2019 8:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Heart, on your honorable mention win in the "I sense tomorrow is the future" contest. I liked your technical view of the future and all the troubles envisioned and the contrast with poetry. Thanks for joining.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2019 3:54:00 PM
Sheri, thanks so much for the contest and my HM, appreciate !
Date: 10/10/2019 8:30:00 AM
True, "The world I love is drowning in debris, and I write poetry!" I like your vision of the future...it might well be so...
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Constance La France
Date: 10/13/2019 6:46:00 PM
Arturo, thanks for visiting my poem, sadly it is the reality for me ~
Date: 10/7/2019 8:30:00 PM
This is sad, so true... I miss the woods of my childhood... Bless you and your poem. Love, Gina
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Constance La France
Date: 10/8/2019 9:23:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the love, yes my poem is sadly true !
Date: 10/7/2019 5:01:00 PM
Bravo Constance, its not a world I would look forward to living in but I guess the youth of today may find it the norm in the not too distant future:-( hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 10/7/2019 6:18:00 PM
Jan, thanks for visiting, sadly unless something changes in the world, this is our reality !
Date: 10/7/2019 4:36:00 PM
Excellent write!
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Constance La France
Date: 10/7/2019 6:17:00 PM
Kim, thanks so much for the excellent !

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