Tomorrow

Do you know a man called”Tomorrow”?
I don’t,
not even the astrologers.
He mingles in silence’
A question, to every person he meets.
He smiles, he weeps as we do,
For every other thing.

Yes I had met him, today as I walked.
He was young and handsome,
An incarnation of darkness,
Well, do you know the question he asks,
Take my word…………as I do not,
if till tomorrow I will last.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Guzzi Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. Light & Love
Patnaik Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 3:12 AM
Thank you Debbie. I am also delighted to be a part of this group.
A   Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 9:20 PM
I know this man tomorrow, he awaits for me in my everyday future... i wonder now how long it will last... i hope this man tomorrow will always come... xox~ LINDA
Patnaik Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 3:11 AM
It will.
A   Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 9:19 PM
Hello Bidhu, stopping by to say i miss my new poet friends, haven't had time to stop by... glad I found this one... xox~ PD
Patnaik Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 3:10 AM
You are always with us. But feels better when you stop by ;)
Anglesey Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 11:13 AM
WOW...amazing thought processes winding through this one. A profound view of tomorrow... :)
Patnaik Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 3:09 AM
Thank You Karen..
Ryerson Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 8:50 AM
'He was young and handsome'...then it suddenly flips to 'an incarnation of darkness'...Outstanding! - Tim
Patnaik Avatar
July 10, 2013 at 2:56 AM
Thank you Sir..I am honored.
Posey Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 5:31 AM
Hidden perception, when found, brings pleasure from the page to the heart of sincere readers.... Your work is pleasing to read... I will visit more later...Jake
Patnaik Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 3:28 AM
Thank you Sir. I am honored.
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