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TOMORROW t'would lift me up in the honey dew the sky dripping with golden refrain t'would also be a Friday for presents and cake not for me if life was fair t'would legitimize my lazy days t'would be a day where no one ran away an outdoors swim toweled off a day where arms were full for me and him t'would that i were on a Minnesota high and my darling at a fetching table for a family of four i'd be okay if normal was the only case this mime can't escape the box except for dandelions at home base i see a fluffy-fat and snowy bunny but not up close she struggles out of arms reach so my pair of grands who grow with each passing day my kiss don't reach ruby lipstick on the screen's hard to throw that far 3/26/2020

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Date: 3/28/2020 4:33:00 PM
Beautiful sentiment and wonderful poem. Stay safe.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/28/2020 4:36:00 PM
Thank you, JC!
Date: 3/28/2020 10:03:00 AM
Oh I wrote something in a simar theme ..it's difficult times and a screen is not the same...great poetry Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/28/2020 4:35:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/28/2020 2:13:00 AM
If only life was fair, love your poem. Kim,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/28/2020 4:33:00 PM
So true, my friend!
Date: 3/26/2020 10:46:00 PM
I enjoyed taking this glimpse into the future with you, Kim. Your imagery and wording were a delight!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/27/2020 7:43:00 AM
Thank you, Evelyn! :)
Date: 3/26/2020 4:26:00 PM
I really love this! Some great lines: "t'would that i were on a Minnesota high and my darling at a fetching table for a family of four i'd be okay if normal was the only case this mime can't escape the box except for dandelions at home base i see a fluffy-fat and snowy bunny but not up close she struggles out of arms reach..."
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2020 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much, Francis!

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