Tommorow Is the First Day of My Life

Tomorrow is the first day of my life


 Today is the last
For I shed all of my past
Hopes, fear, dreams are cast
Aside
My pride...
Are gone

My hear t was broken
No words are spoken,
Just tears and sighs 
Where and why’s?
Silently
Are shed

No more, the joy of waking up
A tender kiss, a morning cup
Of sweetness, honey filled lips
Fluttering eyes and fingertips
Gentle caress
Bodies press 
No more...

But life goes on
New wars are won
I face the world anew.
This much is true
My world 
My life 
Reborn...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 30, 2011 at 4:54 AM
found this very powerfull,joan, sad in places then at the end insperational. very good, i love the way poetry can express inside feelings. and thats what makes it poetry, well done x dean
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October 1, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Welcome to Poetrysoup, I would be honored to have you as friend, drop in anytime my talented friend.
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September 27, 2010 at 5:06 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your creative write .. so positive .. check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv..
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September 27, 2010 at 8:01 AM
WELL DONE JOAN, NICE OUTLOOK IN LIFE. IMPRESSIVE AND AMAZING, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ! HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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September 27, 2010 at 5:20 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Joan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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September 27, 2010 at 5:01 AM
Very nice positive thoughts , Joan
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