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Tombstone Beauty

bury me~ 


with my pen~


its been fun~


write on



03/13/14   written by, Larry Berdoo
                        WRITE ON!

Copyright © Larry Berdoo | Year Posted 2014

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March 31, 2014 at 1:12 PM

nice one :) thank you for reading my words The Dancer :)

March 31, 2014 at 6:10 PM

Thank you for your kind reply Debbie.

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2014 at 1:40 AM

hey, that 's a great epithat. (can't even spell the word, but anyway, I really like it).

March 22, 2014 at 6:42 AM

Andrea, thank you. As for passing spelling in my class, I already curved the grade. For all of us good humans who share our qualities, a flaw here and there is a poem in the "WRITE direction."

March 15, 2014 at 3:03 AM

Nice! Love the write on in each piece you post.

March 15, 2014 at 10:37 AM

Thanks Sarai, for your nice comments.

March 14, 2014 at 11:17 PM

Who knows what you could write in the afterlife. Good little write.

March 15, 2014 at 12:35 AM

Thanks Robert, your commets are well appreciated. Best to you.~~~~~WRITE ON!~~~~

March 13, 2014 at 10:05 PM

Awesome attitude..:-) :-) love it..

March 14, 2014 at 5:40 AM

Thanks for stopping by. Yes, my attitude is a true reflection of the good company I keep hear on the Soup. WRITE ON!~~~~Donna Jones

March 13, 2014 at 9:40 PM

hi Larry, hahah, I love this, bury, me with my pen. What else would I need.... hugs ~SKAT

March 14, 2014 at 5:47 AM

My first Haiku. The Soup has so much talent. Simple comfort, thats ok with me. Thanks. SKAT A ,

March 13, 2014 at 3:11 PM

Yes!!! If that is what has kept us happy in this life on earth...indeed ... bury us with our pens to write poems for Eternity :)

March 13, 2014 at 6:19 PM

Thank you Kim, my first Haiku poem; fake it till you make it. All in good fun, thanks for stopping by.

March 13, 2014 at 2:37 PM

Great epitaph! ... write on. // paul

March 13, 2014 at 6:21 PM

Thank you Paul, learning from many here on the Soup.

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