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Tomato Soup

I never liked tomato soup - that thick slurry of red in a white bowl - childhood winters, Friday nights with a menacing dark pressing against the window as if trying to get in. Tomato soup looked too much like blood poured out of that suffering pictured in the vivid imagery hung along the stations of a child's mind no matter if blest by grace. When older and wiser, I had lamb shank soup, clumped with celery, carrots and loads of gelatinous meat. Each heaped spoonful was a precious gift, a celebration of life.

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Date: 7/21/2025 6:16:00 AM
Dear Paul, I thought I was the only one who didn't like tomato soup. Sometimes it just makes me nauseous. You've put feelings into this poem, a deeper meaning behind the soup. Best, Anne
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Date: 7/21/2025 1:15:00 AM
I hear you loud and clear Paul....l love tomatoes and all that is tomato based but tinned Tommy soup.....No thanks! When l eat out and order Soup of the Day if its tomato its a definite No! Stems from childhood l think ha! Loved your poem my friend! Debx
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Date: 7/20/2025 4:28:00 PM
I agree...the look and feel of tomato soup is hard to get past. I love the flavor, though, especially with grilled cheese. Yum. Now I'm hungry.
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Date: 7/20/2025 2:29:00 PM
Good golly Paulster ya gotta try tomato soup with grilled cheese. It's da bomb dude
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Paul Willason
Date: 7/20/2025 2:45:00 PM
As a passionate lover of cheese it would be a downright sacrilege for me to contaminate its exquisite taste with canned tomato soup. Pizza and pasta OK, soup na..

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