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Wednesday, August 9, 2023
T Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

"Is tomato soup more important than friendship?" by Poet I try to talk to her but she's too busy eating her tomato soup I hit the chat machine and all I hear is falling parmesan cheese but the drama in the online community is too wide I only wish that I could find a friend a friend that has time away from her soup and cheese I try by proclaiming my loneliness my life without tomato soup but a chicken souvlaki salad is what I eat regularly with jalopeno poppers and chicken pastina soup why isn't my soup better than hers and why does she spend more time with her soup than with me I pray one day I'll find the answers but for now I spend countless hours alone while she sips and devours her tomato soup

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Date: 8/10/2023 8:24:00 AM
Beautiful. By the way, tomato is very costly in India, these days. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/10/2023 7:48:00 AM
This is really good, Robert! Congratulations on your placement
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Date: 8/9/2023 9:22:00 PM
This is so “tongue and cheek” brilliant, Robert! Love it! :)
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Date: 8/8/2023 3:42:00 PM
A fun write!
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Date: 8/8/2023 3:12:00 PM
Let the lass eat, lad. Then chat. Good gawd
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