Tolkiens Rose Petals

TOLKIEN’S ROSE PETALS

Battle of Somme:
blood mixed with dirt,
          forms
a corpulent pool,
       bones
and flesh on the banks.

            dim
reflection of friends
      fizzles. . .
the brotherhood dead.

through two peepholes
            of Tolkien’s mask
   ethereal vision of mustard gas.

demons loom,
   but God’s there too,
his cross never more
               t - angible.

Lúthien and Beren wed
      and
  a hobbit is born.

trench fever preserves 
  the elfish language.

and friendship, like rose petals
         remain
  pressed between pages.

8/18/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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August 19, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Loved your poem Kim, he is a wonderful writer..
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Thank you, Silent!
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August 19, 2019 at 6:48 AM
Poem is daintily done, and gorgeous in every way. Loved the last lines the very best being one of your friends!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 7:38 AM
Yay! Hugs and kisses...Kim
Cunningham Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 4:20 AM
I often wonder where he got his inspiration, did he let his mind wander to forget the horrors of the battlefield. Well written Kim. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 6:27 AM
Thank you, Tom! :):)
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