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Tolkiens Rose Petals

TOLKIEN’S ROSE PETALS Battle of Somme: blood mixed with dirt, forms a corpulent pool, bones and flesh on the banks. dim reflection of friends fizzles. . . the brotherhood dead. through two peepholes of Tolkien’s mask ethereal vision of mustard gas. demons loom, but God’s there too, his cross never more t - angible. Lúthien and Beren wed and a hobbit is born. trench fever preserves the elfish language. and friendship, like rose petals remain pressed between pages. 8/18/2019

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Date: 8/19/2019 9:11:00 AM
Loved your poem Kim, he is a wonderful writer..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2019 12:32:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 8/19/2019 6:48:00 AM
Poem is daintily done, and gorgeous in every way. Loved the last lines the very best being one of your friends!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2019 7:38:00 AM
Yay! Hugs and kisses...Kim
Date: 8/19/2019 4:20:00 AM
I often wonder where he got his inspiration, did he let his mind wander to forget the horrors of the battlefield. Well written Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/19/2019 6:27:00 AM
Thank you, Tom! :):)

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