Tolerance-Win

Forget not the good done to you Forgive ever when you get hurt Write on the sand the wind will blew Forget not the good done to you Write on a rock what one helped you No wind of a kind can revert Forget not the good done to you Forgive ever when you get hurt
+++++++ June 13, 2014 Form Triolet (ABaAabAB,Syllable count-64) Dr. Ram Mehta Contest: Tolerance by Vee.Freddie
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Callus Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 1:40 PM
You never fail to pass on words of wisdom in your poems, Dr. Ram. Congrats on your win. // paul
Allison Avatar
June 18, 2014 at 2:19 AM
Congratulations on your fine win Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan x
Onclaud Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 1:01 PM
a thought-provoking, meaningful piece so well expressed, dr. ram.. huggs
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 10:26 AM
Keen way to do the contest theme for Freddie. I love triolets.
Chutani Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 12:14 AM
so very true, Dr. Ram. All the best for contest. Mohan
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