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Token of Regret

Sparks fly, flames ignite intoxicated passion follies of greenness. Haste vows in wishes rapid change adaptation birth of an angel. Smoldered brawl outburst pen scribbles by gavel's call Fire sizzles then drown. Comes winter anew tears of the lonely angel token of regret Dovey Annie (This is my first time writing a Haiku poem. It is raw and lack shine, but hope you guys will enjoy.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 1/11/2012 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations...interesting work!
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Date: 1/4/2012 10:24:00 AM
For a first time it was very well done and professionally great. Congratulations on your 1st round... A well deserved placement.
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Date: 1/3/2012 8:13:00 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best Dovey. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/1/2012 10:47:00 AM
Thanks everybody.. for your compliments and wishes.. =)
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Date: 12/15/2011 10:58:00 AM
Your Haiku's lack nothing. Always be proud of what you write. It comes from a part of you. Congratulations for being featured.
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Date: 12/12/2011 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Dovey. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2011 12:10:00 PM
what a beautiful work....for me its really touching Annie...gud to know that ur from singapore too. Keep posting !
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Date: 6/17/2011 6:46:00 AM
I am enjoying reading some very excellent poetry this morning. Glad to see you have something posted today it was a pleasure to read your poetry. I hope you have an awesome inspiration filled weekend Dovey. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/16/2011 2:00:00 PM
lovely haiku's enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 6/16/2011 1:45:00 PM
Nice string of haiku with apt images, Dovey
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