Togetherness

Your concerns are mine.
Loving and sharing each need.
My concerns are yours.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 23, 2010 at 5:35 PM
Dear Jimmy, Congratulations on YOUR Great Featured POEM " Togetherness " A winning POEM in the "Awesome Advice" Contest Superbly Done YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Jimmy. Love, Carol
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 5:51 AM
Congratulations on your win Jimmy in Linda-Marie's contest "Awesome Advice"(For The Bride & Groom). Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 9:17 PM
I love how the first line and last line are like book ends to each other! congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 7:23 PM
Congratulations on your 4th Place Win in Linda Marie's Contest, Poetic Warlock! Real good advice, always! Love, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Congrats Poetic Warlock on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great piece to share with us all.. with luv.. ciao..
Cwiak Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 9:05 PM
Concern for each other is so important in a marriage. You expressed it just beautifully. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Roberts Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:15 PM
beautiful, congrats on your win
Johnson Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 4:19 PM
Wise indeed. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 3:41 PM
Congrats, P.W. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:47 AM
Congrats Poetic Warlock on your success in my contes.. however the system will not allow me to finalize or post my winning list due to technical problems...so enjoy and thankxxx for supporting my endeavors..with luv..ciao..
Roberts Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 1:59 PM
beautiful, good luck in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 1:59 PM
That is the way it works most of the time..Sara
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