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Togetherness

As we lay in the bed Upon his chest rests my head. I listen to his heart beating in rhythm with mine A love so intertwined. Feeling at peace, my heart at ease. A hug so sweet, love that makes me feel so complete. He wraps me in his love. I feel as if he were sent from above. Together night and day, Forever our love will stay.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/23/2010 1:14:00 PM
Very romantic and passionate short write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/23/2010 7:30:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Audrey. Thank you for sharing. I hope you have a wonderful weekend and that you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/22/2010 10:29:00 AM
very beautiful poem it touched my heart and made me cry inside good writting keep it up
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Date: 1/22/2010 8:44:00 AM
i love the word "stay". jhl
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Date: 1/22/2010 8:29:00 AM
Very sweet little poem, Audrey!
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