Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

Together Writing a Dare - Collab

Stolen time together where only fireflies see...
We cuddle up close and land where we can be free...
Up high in the road we sit with clouds as our walls...
And with a beautiful background of rainbow falls...
A king size playground with fruit in each corner...
Our love showers over us with no borders...
We dip our lips into it for a taste and savor its sweetness...
And with deep kisses that trance and fly endless...
Like a mango wrestling a peach, the trail from it sticks...
Now covered in juices of love we swallow while the clock ticks...
And with drenched sugar coated fingers we drown for awhile...
Only to rise back up for another day in our own loving style...


Written by Michael & Rosanna Falotico
for PD's Dare contest
The Dare was to collab with my wife and write
about our weekend getaway

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 18, 2012 at 12:18 PM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s contest MJF. Love, Carol

Gwendolen Song June 15, 2012 at 2:13 PM Oh yes, a dreamy treat! Congrats on this honeymoon write! You should treat her to a steak dinner for helping you win! Go ROSANNA, GO!!!!!!!! (Girls' RULE!) hahah.

Christopher Bunton March 6, 2012 at 6:29 PM Congratulations!

Andrew Crisci March 5, 2012 at 12:39 AM My big congratulations to you Michael & Rosanna on this stupendous win in PD's Dare contest. Yes, you did it in your own loving style! Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs, Andrew.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 4, 2012 at 3:13 PM congrats Michael luv on a fantastic first place win for truth or dare.. amazing collab .. lovely words of luv from lovers in luv... JG .. with luv.. xoxoxo

Carol Sunshine Brown March 4, 2012 at 11:03 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Truth and Dare and Free Verse" contest Michael & Rosanna. Love, Carol

Jonas L. Rozario March 4, 2012 at 9:38 AM Nicely written Michael...congrats on your win.

Dinda Minardi March 4, 2012 at 7:52 AM Congratulations on the win, Michael! Yaayyy!! I thought so this was the winner :D

Maureen Lefanue March 4, 2012 at 4:04 AM Congratulations, Michael, on your win. Cheers, Maureen

David Williams March 4, 2012 at 2:14 AM Michael congrats on your win, sounds like you both had a fun and busy weekend...Dave

Nick Bagnall March 4, 2012 at 12:43 AM Super steamy, beautifully written, congratulations on the first place.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 3, 2012 at 9:57 PM soooo u liked my guy thingy poem.. Ron thought it was cute too while he was typing it.. I also added another verse about beimg a stud.. oh.. my son texted me .. the pkg. a,me today.. am, so anxious to see it luv.. JG.. back to feminine mode .. xoxoxo..

Poet Destroyer A March 3, 2012 at 9:06 PM Michael, this is a very beautiful poem.. ..I have to say.. I enjoyed this contest and your entry so much. Thank you and congratulations on a DARE well done~ALWAYS PD*

Phyllis Babcock March 3, 2012 at 5:56 PM So nice to do this with your wife. Those get away weekends renew the spirit. Lovely write. love phyl

Patrick Cornwall March 2, 2012 at 10:19 PM Very beautifully written poem you both did..patrick

Wilma Neels February 29, 2012 at 10:49 AM I already see this one on the winner's list Michael! Yourself and Rosanna make a perfect couple even in poetry you make magic together! Love Wilma

Dawn Mclaughlin February 29, 2012 at 2:29 AM Love this xx Thank you for all your lovely comments on my poems :)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 29, 2012 at 2:11 AM Hi,Michael I take a short visit to read you last poem(and yours wife) today, a collab and for contest lovely and romantick poem,glad I visit you today.Good luck in contest!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 28, 2012 at 11:17 PM btw, I Love that line "mango wrestling a peach"! just love it :D

Kabuteng P.Ink K. February 28, 2012 at 11:16 PM Hi Michael :D! This sure is a wonderful collab with Rosanna! :D-- You sure seem to have had a wonderful and romantic weekend with her-- I wouldn't have expected any less from you :D-- awesome write and thanks & xoxo to you for the birthday greetings :D soupmail in a bit :D

Andrea Dietrich February 28, 2012 at 9:18 PM wow, you should write with your wife more often. THIS was fantastic, Michael.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 28, 2012 at 4:59 PM a new poetry star is born Michael luv.. now u must get Rosanna to join PS.. wow what fun this must have been and a great dare given by PD.. good luck in contest to both of u .. luv always JG.. xoxo..

Sara Kendrick February 28, 2012 at 4:46 PM I especially like the line "Like a mango wrestling a peach"...I got a chuckle in the middle of the romantic work..Good luck in the contest with this great work..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed..Thanks for the kind review..Sara

Kevin Clark February 28, 2012 at 4:02 PM Congratulations to you AND your wife on this great poem. Your both great romantics.

Gwendolen Song February 28, 2012 at 3:08 PM This is a marriage and get-a-way vacation made in heaven! The dangerous poetry duo..ha ha. Today is my bday and guess what arrived in my mailbox?...YOUR AWESOME BOOK!! Loved every bit of it....From the cover, to the dedications, to the sentimental way you express your love towards Mrs. Falotico too! It's a keeper!! I was laughing my head off at the paper clip confetti...You made my day!! Thanks...I needed that! Love, Gwendolen

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