Together We Ran Away

Together we ran away 
                                                 Leaving this dull town 
                                         Driving to somewhere incredible 
                                      Blasting the radio to sweet melodies
                                      Cool crisp breeze blowing on our skin
                              The smell of sweet summer air filling our noses
                         While we watch the vibrant emerald lands pass us by  
                                 Driving to someplace only we would know
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 12:28 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 10:03 AM
Rachel, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:59 PM
Rachel, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Bunch Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 3:49 AM
How delightful. Sometimes, it's good just to get out an drive, get away from it all. Nice write.
Uche O. Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 7:37 AM
realism... i got it. beautifully sketch dear poet.
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