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Together Forever

Together Forever? Some words they scar Which last forever I know you fail to recall But I still remember You go ahead And say you are overwhelmed That We are back together But one things for certain I still remember You left a big scar And It will last forever It will never feel the same Though it’s all cleared out I will still just remember We were once together Nor scar, nor confused As light as a feather But that all changed And we will never be as near As once we were together You will certainly not know what I have enclosed In my heart Where it will stay forever A blizzard so wild Which I can let out whenever To terminate you’re ahead The route you took You could’ve rehabilitated Weren’t you the chooser? Then why did you go A single sentence wrecked us forever But can we still try To be what us onetime were together Forever?

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Date: 2/23/2018 12:31:00 PM
HI Bisma you have expressed your feeling very well. i love reading your poem. i like the last lines most where you wish to be together again........ "A single sentence wrecked us forever But can we still try To be what us onetime were together Forever?"
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Date: 7/12/2017 10:31:00 PM
I really enjoyed your poem. Very heartfelt and raw. Excellent work!
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Date: 5/1/2017 7:35:00 AM
A nice poem in which you show your sadness and happiness, its was a nice poem and I also have a request which is I m also new on this site and posted two poems but I wanted peoples to read them as well, so it s my kind request to read my poems and comment them, my name is faraz ajmal and I m also from pakistan,
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Bisma Bakhtawer
Date: 5/1/2017 7:57:00 AM
thanks... faraz even i am from pakistan and i live in islamabad.
Date: 4/29/2017 11:30:00 AM
A poem with a lot of sadness and hidden anger, but also with a willingness to try again. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Bisma Bakhtawer
Date: 5/1/2017 7:22:00 AM
thanks

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