Together For Life

We are a perfect pair of shoes
that shows the time’s effects or use.
Our knot does not make itself loose
as we are laced so glorious.


Form: Dalit



Note:
This form is called Dalit, a traditional short Filipino poem which is only a quatrain, having 8 syllables in each line. The rhyming scheme is aaaa.
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October 6, 2022 at 11:28 PM
Bernard…I love the Dalit form. Also, the meaning is just beautiful. Thank you,. Congratulations on all the poems you have written.superb! Respectfully, Panagiota Enjoyed my days at Poem Hunter.
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October 7, 2022 at 3:18 AM
Thanks for the heartwarming comment. Please always keep safe. God bless.
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