Together

A yellow flame opens 
The Dark;blood thrusts 
Through my heart. Neurons 
Fire in my brain; my Stomach 
Gurgles. You breathe. My skin 
Is skin as yours. Blood thrusts 
Through Your heart; 
You are warm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2010 at 7:07 AM
sorry to ask you here. I am rushing to school now, but just wanted to ask you to go to my blog and guess your number if you can find the time. I'd love to see your guess! LUv, andrea
Meade Stephenson Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 9:35 AM
Short yet so very powerful with the images that one can infer from your descriptiveness David. One can feel the raw power of passion emanating! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes! Have a blessed day~Mary
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 6:44 AM
YOu paint a visual of togetherness, DAvid, and thanks for your recent comment. LUv,Andrea
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 4:42 AM
David, thank you for your most welcome comments on my poetry, yesterday. Sincerely, Dane Ann
Chircop Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 11:19 PM
passionate indeed..from the sizzling grill..Charma:)
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