Together

A yellow flame opens The Dark;blood thrusts Through my heart. Neurons Fire in my brain; my Stomach Gurgles. You breathe. My skin Is skin as yours. Blood thrusts Through Your heart; You are warm.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2010 7:07:00 AM

sorry to ask you here. I am rushing to school now, but just wanted to ask you to go to my blog and guess your number if you can find the time. I'd love to see your guess! LUv, andrea

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 3/16/2010 9:35:00 AM

Short yet so very powerful with the images that one can infer from your descriptiveness David. One can feel the raw power of passion emanating! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes! Have a blessed day~Mary

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/16/2010 6:44:00 AM

YOu paint a visual of togetherness, DAvid, and thanks for your recent comment. LUv,Andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/16/2010 4:42:00 AM

David, thank you for your most welcome comments on my poetry, yesterday. Sincerely, Dane Ann

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/15/2010 11:19:00 PM

passionate indeed..from the sizzling grill..Charma:)