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Together

Together, we are... A perfect match; A united soul; The complete whole; Each other’s catch. Together, we will... Cross the widest river; Climb the highest mountain; Drink from the same fountain; Eat with the same silver.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/16/2010 6:12:00 AM
soft smile it can not be a quatrain and have 5 lines ;) also the end rhyme pattern must be abab not as you have aa and then bb. I would just list this form as VERSE, and a fine verse at that! Light & Love
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Date: 8/22/2009 5:18:00 AM
a sweet poem, harmony is great hold on to it and neevr take each other for granted, this kind of love is for eternity, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/22/2009 4:41:00 AM
Nicely written. Sara
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