Together

Together, we are...
A perfect match;
A united soul;
The complete whole;
Each other’s catch.

Together, we will...
Cross the widest river;
Climb the highest mountain;
Drink from the same fountain;
Eat with the same silver.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 6:12 AM
soft smile it can not be a quatrain and have 5 lines ;) also the end rhyme pattern must be abab not as you have aa and then bb. I would just list this form as VERSE, and a fine verse at that! Light & Love
Christian Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 5:18 AM
a sweet poem, harmony is great hold on to it and neevr take each other for granted, this kind of love is for eternity, God bless you from diane
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2009 at 4:41 AM
Nicely written. Sara
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