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He gifted her the brick of endearment and she built an empire of love

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Date: 6/15/2022 1:30:00 AM
Oh my gosh. This is so beautiful Swetha! Thank you.
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Date: 1/30/2020 12:22:00 PM
WOW. I admire.
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Date: 10/21/2019 1:59:00 PM
An inspiring Monoku...Well done
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:12:00 AM
Thank you so much :)
Date: 10/20/2019 10:52:00 PM
Swetha, So nice to find and read your Monoku tonight. Wrought with a poet's passion. -Richard
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:12:00 AM
Thanks a lot Richard :)
Date: 10/18/2019 9:54:00 AM
She is a most gifted builder.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:13:00 AM
Yes indeed :)
Date: 10/10/2019 11:31:00 PM
OW THY LOVE UNITES THE WHOLE IN ONE
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:13:00 AM
True Mahtab :)
Date: 10/1/2019 8:17:00 AM
And you weave a most beautiful and eloquent Monoku! I like your poetry, Swetha.. Enjoyed the read.. Regards and blessings.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 10/27/2019 6:11:00 AM
Thanks a lot Besma :)
Date: 9/29/2019 2:30:00 AM
Wow! This is excellent, Swetha! And you, with one line, built a poetic masterpiece! Best regards // paul
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 9/29/2019 6:15:00 AM
Thanks a ton Paul :)
Date: 9/28/2019 5:00:00 PM
Such a powerful picture.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 9/29/2019 6:14:00 AM
Thanks a lot. :)
Date: 9/27/2019 1:01:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I cannot stop saying it. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Truly, it is how I feel right now Swetha.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 9/27/2019 10:46:00 AM
Aww!! That's so sweet of you. :)
Date: 9/26/2019 3:49:00 PM
Awesome. PR
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 9/27/2019 10:46:00 AM
Thanks a lot :)
Date: 9/25/2019 12:59:00 PM
Short and sweet but says so much. Tom.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 9/25/2019 8:02:00 PM
Thank you Tom
Date: 9/24/2019 7:35:00 PM
Sweet and loving, Swetha. Nice monoku! Cheers, Gershon
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 9/25/2019 8:02:00 PM
Thank you Gershon :)
Date: 9/24/2019 3:38:00 PM
Lovely, Swetha.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 9/25/2019 8:03:00 PM
Thanks a lot :)
Date: 9/24/2019 3:11:00 PM
Love can move mountains..so well said, Swetha.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 9/25/2019 8:03:00 PM
Yes indeed Vijay. Thank you :)
Date: 9/24/2019 12:19:00 PM
Really nice. So much said in a few short words. The love can be felt in this deeply.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 9/25/2019 8:03:00 PM
Thank you Chris. :)

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