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Today Was the Second Best Day Ever

"Best day ever!" I had a habit of sayin' After another day of plentiful playin' Then came the dawn. This here day's gone! Tomorrow's the best 'cause this'n ain't stayin' ~ Today can only be the best Until it takes a nighttime rest Tomorrow's task For all. To bask In the shadow of a new day's breast

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Susan Palli

Date: 8/24/2017 8:47:00 AM

Cute limerick! Like the wisdom in it.

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 8/25/2017 7:02:00 PM

Thanks for visiting! ~ john

Hannah Borke

Date: 8/7/2017 1:20:00 PM

People with humor enjoy life

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 8/8/2017 9:23:00 AM

I always knew that, but it took me a long time to decide to live that way. Never too late though, eh? Cheerios!

Michael Tor

Date: 8/3/2017 1:19:00 PM

So true John live each day as if your last make them all great...

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 8/6/2017 4:54:00 PM

Amen

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/3/2017 11:55:00 AM

Wow! Saving this one! Love your outlook on life!

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 8/6/2017 4:54:00 PM

Ooh, I be in tall cotton! Thanks kim.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/30/2017 12:57:00 PM

Today is the best day ever John as we never know if we will wake to see 'tomorrow' we can only hope - From the title I thought the poem was about me not 'leaving' oh how wrong can a gal be she says with firmly tongue in check lol lol :-) hugs jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 7/31/2017 8:04:00 AM

My mountain biking partner and I have so many great rides we always say "best day ever!" I decided since we can expect tomorrow's ride to be even more awesome, then today is second best. (a little too much of an inside joke;-). (Or attitude:-) I never once doubted your zinger. You couldn't leave or tomorrow wouldn't come and I wouldn't be sipping coffee and being silly this morning:) Cheermiskins and huggadooskies! ~ j