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Today Time Stood Still

Today time stood still, I could see existence in its clearest form. A vibe of coldness and silence, yet peaceful and reassuring, you could almost imagine it to be the same feeling of initial death. The curse of knowledge and intelligence is you know too much. Sometimes that ignorant bliss seems attractive, but even if given the choice I would not go back, as the more I learned the more i seeked. I pray for humanity and the will of the people, the story draws close to the end and with hope I watch . . . in the end good will always prevail, Amen

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/9/2012 4:20:00 PM
beautiful and nice. kingfemi.
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Date: 5/18/2012 8:03:00 PM
Good Vs Evil and the winner is GOOOOOOOOOOOOd...patrick
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Date: 5/18/2012 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Gareth. Love, Carol
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Gareth Smith
Date: 5/18/2012 9:18:00 AM
Featured? What does that mean exactly this is all still new to me. Thanks for the warm comments x
Date: 5/9/2012 1:10:00 PM
Gareth welcome to the soup, I like it..David
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Date: 5/9/2012 4:55:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Gareth. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2012 3:46:00 PM
Hi Gareth! :D I really like your poem :) I would also like to warmly welcome you to Poetry Soup, and hope you and your poems become more popular ;D ~Kye C~
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