Today Is the Day

Today is the day, you broke an innocent heart, her soul is scarred for life and the fire burns within you. Today is the day, you said good-bye before it was over, she started to cry. Today is the day, you're dying within because you know what you did. Today is the day, you broke my heart and I knew from the very start you'd unlove me someday.

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Jay Loveless

Date: 10/20/2009 10:41:00 AM

16 in a month! anyways idk if you commented any of mine at all but idc. i love your work. though it sucks that it comes from pain but hell i know that one well enough myself. xo Raiin

Joanie Yeager

Date: 12/15/2008 6:16:00 AM

Truely love this poem =) I know how bad a person can fill when it comes to this trust me i have so been there...And your in 9th grade? me 2's lol but i felled so im aposed to be in 10th but who cares lol well im 15 and its realy kewlz to meet you

Maryam Jameela Haniff

Date: 12/11/2008 2:20:00 PM

Great poem, thanx for alllllll the comments....always Maryam

Blaine Anderson

Date: 12/10/2008 1:54:00 PM

Thank you for all your comments! I really appreciate it. I am 26. You can find me on MySpace @ www.myspace.com/djbwaino

Serenity D'Nae Montgomery

Date: 12/10/2008 9:31:00 AM

I was really sad when I wrote this one..