Today Is the Day

Today is the day,
you broke an innocent heart,
her soul is scarred for life 
and the fire burns within you.
Today is the day,
you said good-bye
before it was over,
she started to cry.
Today is the day,
you're dying within
because you know what you did.
Today is the day,
you broke my heart
and I knew from the very start
you'd unlove me someday.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/20/2009 10:41:00 AM
16 in a month! anyways idk if you commented any of mine at all but idc. i love your work. though it sucks that it comes from pain but hell i know that one well enough myself. xo Raiin
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Date: 12/15/2008 6:16:00 AM
Truely love this poem =) I know how bad a person can fill when it comes to this trust me i have so been there...And your in 9th grade? me 2's lol but i felled so im aposed to be in 10th but who cares lol well im 15 and its realy kewlz to meet you
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Date: 12/11/2008 2:20:00 PM
Great poem, thanx for alllllll the comments....always Maryam
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Date: 12/10/2008 1:54:00 PM
Thank you for all your comments! I really appreciate it. I am 26. You can find me on MySpace @ www.myspace.com/djbwaino
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Date: 12/10/2008 9:31:00 AM
I was really sad when I wrote this one..
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