Today Brings Change

today brings much change the birds hail Spring's arrival Winter relinquish'd

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Heidi Sands

Date: 7/16/2019 9:51:00 AM

This is a great welcome to Spring. Well done :)

Quoth Theraven
Date: 9/21/2019 7:16:00 PM

Heidi, Let's hope for Spring's sake..we get another try,,, -Richard

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/13/2019 7:00:00 PM

Alleluia! Good one. Nothing is better than the arrival of spring and all the good things that follow.

Quoth Theraven
Date: 7/13/2019 9:59:00 PM

Line, Thank you for noticing the misspelled 'relinquishes'. I was worried that it might add a syllable. Then I noticed the syllable count. Good grief... -Charlie Brown

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2019 8:10:00 PM

I love that winter has to finally let go!!

Allen Beilschmidt Sr.

Date: 4/17/2019 3:49:00 PM

lovely haiku

David Mchattie

Date: 4/2/2019 12:34:00 PM

In Saskatoon, winter's not over til the fat lady sings.