Today Brings Change

today brings much change
the birds hail Spring's arrival 
Winter relinquish'd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Sands Avatar
July 16, 2019 at 9:51 AM
This is a great welcome to Spring. Well done :)
Theraven Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 7:16 PM
Heidi, Let's hope for Spring's sake..we get another try,,, -Richard
Gauthier Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 7:00 PM
Alleluia! Good one. Nothing is better than the arrival of spring and all the good things that follow.
Theraven Avatar
July 13, 2019 at 9:59 PM
Line, Thank you for noticing the misspelled 'relinquishes'. I was worried that it might add a syllable. Then I noticed the syllable count. Good grief... -Charlie Brown
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 8:10 PM
I love that winter has to finally let go!!
Beilschmidt Sr. Avatar
April 17, 2019 at 3:49 PM
lovely haiku
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April 2, 2019 at 12:34 PM
In Saskatoon, winter's not over til the fat lady sings.
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