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Today and Always

Today and always, only you made me gay Eye-to-eye we collide at the quay On one blessed moment of spring May Today and always, you have a way My heartbeats you made 'em sway Sweet lovely bard I want to play Today and always, passion you display All by my side you sturdily stay Affection rays, dime you didn't like me pay Today and always, allow me to say We have been touched flexible like clay Forevermore attunes beginning that day by Olive_eloisa 4:05 pm May 05,2014

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/7/2014 3:48:00 PM

What a sweet and heartfelt write, Olive. Very nicely rhymed. I really enjoyed reading this romantic poem today. Great work! :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/8/2014 5:39:00 AM

thank you so much Kelly.. :) your comments are noted and appreciated.. :)

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/7/2014 11:50:00 AM

"Today and always, passion you display All by my side you sturdily stay Affection rays, dime you didn't like me pay" These three lines are brilliant! You have a clever and romantic way with words, Olive. Precious poem. It is as mesmerizing as diamonds. The optimistic affection is portrayed in this verse. Simply super! Have yourself a fine week. (x -DWB

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/8/2014 4:10:00 AM

:) thank you so much David :) Glad you like it as much as I like it when I'm writing it :)

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/6/2014 5:56:00 PM

Olive, this deserves to be printed, wood-laminated then hung on the wall where people always pass by. The world needs the kind of positivity that's inherent in you.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:18:00 AM

thanks much Jake:) Yes when all else are goind down hold on to that positivity. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/6/2014 12:40:00 PM

whoever said romance is dead should read your dreamy work... you must be in love to quill this, olive!... sigh!.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:11:00 AM

hahah yes yes yes NEtte.. Im in love with something else.. :)

Richard Palmer

Date: 5/6/2014 9:13:00 AM

Today is the first I read your display, Today and always I am here to stay, Your lovely poem has captured me that way,,,wonderful write Olive

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:08:00 AM

Thanks for that tree lines RIchard.. :) Was nice of you to come and made a comment. ;)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 5/6/2014 7:25:00 AM

You've shined a light on this very day. Wonderful read.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:06:00 AM

THank much Scott,, I apppreciate your wonderful comment.. :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/5/2014 9:16:00 PM

This is not only BEAUTIFUL, this is a masterpiece!!!! Excellent!!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:01:00 AM

Thanks Arthur.. :) your beautiful comment is much appreciated.. :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 5/5/2014 8:09:00 PM

" My heartbeats you made'em sway..." that's super fine feeling Olive. Very good alliteration in this poem. Sometimes affection should make us feel very secure. J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:04:00 AM

yes of course there must be that sense of security otherwise will always be on a worrisome state of mind or something else.. thanks for coming by and reading JAB.. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/5/2014 7:30:00 PM

Such lovely thoughts!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/7/2014 3:00:00 AM

Thank you Chard :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/5/2014 5:36:00 PM

Isn't it lovely to met love on the way, especially in May, so sweet that it makes your heart sway!! Hold on to it Olive_eloi. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/5/2014 5:39:00 PM

:D :D :D i don't know but i feel still no one made my heart sway really except some notes and messages of my ----lette.. :D lools thanks much Dearie Paul.. :)

Tim Smith

Date: 5/5/2014 5:13:00 PM

She is one lucky lady...hugs Tim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/6/2014 4:16:00 PM

Thank you so much TIm.. :) God bless you always.. :)