Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Triolet

Today and Always

Today and always, only you made me gay
Eye-to-eye we collide at the quay
On one blessed moment of spring May

Today and always, you have a way
My heartbeats you made 'em sway
Sweet lovely bard I want to play

Today and always, passion you  display
All by my side you sturdily stay
Affection rays, dime you didn't like me pay

Today and always, allow me to say
We have been touched flexible like clay
Forevermore attunes beginning that day

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Olive_eloisa
4:05 pm
May 05,2014

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Kelly Deschler May 7, 2014 at 3:48 PM What a sweet and heartfelt write, Olive. Very nicely rhymed. I really enjoyed reading this romantic poem today. Great work! :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 8, 2014 at 5:39 AM thank you so much Kelly.. :) your comments are noted and appreciated.. :)

David William Breidenthal May 7, 2014 at 11:50 AM "Today and always, passion you display All by my side you sturdily stay Affection rays, dime you didn't like me pay" These three lines are brilliant! You have a clever and romantic way with words, Olive. Precious poem. It is as mesmerizing as diamonds. The optimistic affection is portrayed in this verse. Simply super! Have yourself a fine week. (x -DWB Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 8, 2014 at 4:10 AM :) thank you so much David :) Glad you like it as much as I like it when I'm writing it :)

Jake Ponce May 6, 2014 at 5:56 PM Olive, this deserves to be printed, wood-laminated then hung on the wall where people always pass by. The world needs the kind of positivity that's inherent in you. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:18 AM thanks much Jake:) Yes when all else are goind down hold on to that positivity. :)

Nette Onclaud May 6, 2014 at 12:40 PM whoever said romance is dead should read your dreamy work... you must be in love to quill this, olive!... sigh!.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:11 AM hahah yes yes yes NEtte.. Im in love with something else.. :)

Richard Palmer May 6, 2014 at 9:13 AM Today is the first I read your display, Today and always I am here to stay, Your lovely poem has captured me that way,,,wonderful write Olive Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:08 AM Thanks for that tree lines RIchard.. :) Was nice of you to come and made a comment. ;)

Scott Thirtyseven May 6, 2014 at 7:25 AM You've shined a light on this very day. Wonderful read. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:06 AM THank much Scott,, I apppreciate your wonderful comment.. :)

Arthur Vaso May 5, 2014 at 9:16 PM This is not only BEAUTIFUL, this is a masterpiece!!!! Excellent!!!! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:01 AM Thanks Arthur.. :) your beautiful comment is much appreciated.. :)

Justin Bordner May 5, 2014 at 8:09 PM " My heartbeats you made'em sway..." that's super fine feeling Olive. Very good alliteration in this poem. Sometimes affection should make us feel very secure. J.A.B. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:04 AM yes of course there must be that sense of security otherwise will always be on a worrisome state of mind or something else.. thanks for coming by and reading JAB.. :)

Richard Lamoureux May 5, 2014 at 7:30 PM Such lovely thoughts! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 3:00 AM Thank you Chard :)

Paul Callus May 5, 2014 at 5:36 PM Isn't it lovely to met love on the way, especially in May, so sweet that it makes your heart sway!! Hold on to it Olive_eloi. // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 5, 2014 at 5:39 PM :D :D :D i don't know but i feel still no one made my heart sway really except some notes and messages of my ----lette.. :D lools thanks much Dearie Paul.. :)

Tim Smith May 5, 2014 at 5:13 PM She is one lucky lady...hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 6, 2014 at 4:16 PM Thank you so much TIm.. :) God bless you always.. :)