Charles Reese Poet Triolet

Today

Today I paid the bills and the piper
Now I find my treasure and a friend
I know that the future will be brighter
Today I paid the bills and the piper
I'm on pins and needles I'm so hyper
I feel as though my life's without end
Today I paid the bills and the piper
Now I find a treasure and a friend

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Sara Kendrick October 2, 2014 at 6:22 AM Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Brenda Meier-Hans September 22, 2014 at 12:14 PM What a great feeling when it comes. Nice poem Charles. Congratulations on your win.

Poet Destroyer A September 5, 2014 at 1:12 PM Hello Charles, I'm wondering, what is a piper! Well, I can imagine what it is! I hope your bills weren't as high. Seeing, you found a treasure. :) A xool poem...LINDA Charles Reese September 5, 2014 at 1:21 PM just having fun with this poem "piper" to bear the unfavorable consequences of one's actions or pleasures . No need to read to much in it though.

Eileen Manassian September 3, 2014 at 8:54 AM :) Hope these good feelings last a long time. I enjoyed this very much. I've never even tried one of these. Maybe soon! Charles Reese September 3, 2014 at 8:58 AM Thanks for the complement. After reviewing some of your work I'm sure you can do this style with ease.

Verlena S. Walker September 2, 2014 at 3:44 AM Rated!

Verlena S. Walker September 2, 2014 at 3:43 AM Superlative Charles. Super-awesomely written... Verlena Charles Reese September 2, 2014 at 7:11 PM thanks, hopefully it does well it the contest.