Today

Seeing your portrait of old age I remembered once long ago how you captivated me with your gorgeous youthful figure and charming face !

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/7/2019 3:51:00 AM

Hello! I watch my daughter grow from a baby to motherhood. I saw my parents age. Now, it's my turn. As Vitaj says the reality is change. I still love the love of my life more deeply than ever and he is no longer 27. But my love for him has deep roots. I liked the honesty in your poem Panagiota

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/21/2019 8:24:00 AM

Beauty no more..reality of life..well captured, Akham.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/21/2019 5:01:00 AM

The reality of life...time, age and change, a process which we cannot halt. At least we can rely on what lies whitin! Regards // paul