Toblerone

Perched up on the shelf Watching me as I go by Knowing that I can't resist Your chocolate sugar high Your triangular packaging Triggers a pavlovian response An uncontrollable craving An undeniable want Tearing off your paper foil I'm torn with indecision Knowing that the truth is You've absolutely no nutrition Too bad, the point is moot... I gulp down a hefty chunk And with a sinking feeling Know my diet plans have sunk

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Deb M

Date: 5/10/2023 7:18:00 AM

Great poem Julie…..your poems and humour are very relatable! You are really funny ….l see you are a Kiwi are You sure you're not an Aussie you sound like one! Debx

Julie Draper
Date: 5/10/2023 10:54:00 PM

Thanks Deb, I'm so pleased you enjoy my warped sense of humour! I'm a born and bred Kiwi, but I do a good Kath and Kim impersonation after a few wines hahahaha :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 5/5/2023 10:57:00 AM

nicely done, julie! there was some controversy about changing the logo on toblerone recently, but i gather that the chocolate is still delicious...

Julie Draper
Date: 5/5/2023 2:31:00 PM

Thanks Ilene, I appreciate your encouragement. I can confirm that the chocolate is still delicious! :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/5/2023 2:46:00 AM

ha ha ha love it - we dont buy Toblerone but a copy cat called Twin peaks - it is soooo tempting to have a huge chunk but i do try to resist but some days i have found resistance is futile lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Julie Draper
Date: 5/5/2023 2:30:00 PM

Thanks Jan, I'm pleased you enjoyed it :) Haha, yes, resistance is definitely futile on most days for me! thanks for taking the time to comment.