Tobacco Plants

Tobacco Plants Life emerges, Like a silent cigarette, Pre-ordained to kill. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen April 4, 2008

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Date: 11/27/2009 3:56:00 PM

Wow! You pack a punch with this one. Good way to deliver your message. Nice use of similie to make your point. Thank you for the congrats. Keep up the good writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/25/2009 11:21:00 PM

All smokers,,hope you read this Haiku..Smoking Kills..Wish my dad could read this Haiku Dane,original haiku indeed with a good message:)Charma

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/25/2009 9:54:00 AM

Tell me about it... I have been trying to quit for many months now..... Awesome write.....:JP]

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/25/2009 9:35:00 AM

Good work Dane Ann...you are so right on. Hope your feeling better. BG

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/25/2009 9:15:00 AM

Well this hit home> I was addicted to nicotene for 42 years before I finally was able to kick the habit. Nicotene free for 2 1/2 years now. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2009 7:16:00 AM

Sad Haiku. Could there be a good use from this plant? Or is man's interferance with the plant that has made it the killer that it is? Excellent Haiku. Keep that magical pen flowing. Sara...I have added some to my write "El Condor Pasa"