To Write of Love

If I was to write of love, then from my
nib your heart would flow. Dreams
would be the parchment on which I
scribe, and your fragrance the sentence
formed. A desire and passion would 
flood my page, with intermittent kisses
instead of punctuation. Chapters of 
grace would fill your eyes, the contents
feelings spill your soul. The ink from
deep and pulsing veins, would secrete
the validity of my emotions. I see and 
do not see, for with your absence my
page is blank, yet in your thought reams
I write. Let this page be a blanket on 
which those eyes could sleep, and
realize my love is not a dream, but
reality in reaching words.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 3:09 PM
very beautiful poem, heart felt
Chircop Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Deep romantic messeage Daniel..You write of love so beautifully..'Let this page be a blanket on which those eyes could sleep..and realise my love is not a dream'.these verses are so touching.'for with your absence my page is blank'..She must be some kind of woman..to mean this much to you.and She is lucky to have your verses dedicated to her,,Hope She gets to read this gem...going to my favz..Charma
Kendrick Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 7:36 AM
Excellent write that is emotive, descriptive and expressive...The line that says "A desire and passion would flood my page, with intermittent kisses instead of punctuation."..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 7:25 AM
The abiity "To Write of Love" is your specialty, Daniel. I've been trying to figure out whom your style emulates and I do believe you have the reincarnated spirit of Lord Byron. The only difference is that he was something of a Casanova while your words seem sincere. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn
Palli Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 5:20 AM
I agree with Jeralynn
Clark Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 5:09 AM
A most lavish inhalation to awaken the senses Daniel......What a wonderful way to start my morning, inspiration for the heart and soul..Thank you my friend, a new favorite! Love Jeralynn
Segal Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 5:08 AM
What a beautiful poem, love Simone
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 4:39 AM
As usual, Daniel, your love poetry is superb! (If you haven't entered my chicken poetry contest, please do...I've heard you have great wit, too!) Smiles, Dane Ann
Sweetheart Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 4:22 AM
Imaginative and so very beautiful.. all the poets must be in a "love fest" mood as so many have written on LUV but none as lovely as your words Daniel... the validity of my emotions.. a partner's dream spoken and heard... a new fav my friend.. glad u enjoyed my Sentiments of the Heart.. I have a wonderful inspiration to write from... luv.. "Sweetheart"...
Lusha Avatar
March 13, 2010 at 4:09 AM
So beautiful and passionate I could sleep for eternity and be blisfully happy.....Daniel thank you for your lovely comments always.... Allie
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